Gabrielle - Concept

For Correctors in the group: I'm not so much concerned about the hair or head, but the anatomy of the body and pose. I had so much difficulty with that and if you could help ne correct it, that would be wonderful!

This is to be posted in , the words in bold are directed towards the correcters of the improvement-club.
 
 
Anyone remember this gal? Character Concept

    I am wanting to do a series of pictures including my sis and me as elf adventurers! They pair up with a sly black cat named Nemmy (We have a black cat named Nemmy) the
potion maker/trader. I have one picture sketched out, but it's such a tedious picture because it has a full background and lots of mecha! (Assuming
mecha also refers to medevil/fantasy armor.)

   They ride a giant direwolf as their mount whom they call Angel for her angelic-white canines and glistening, fluffy fur. (We own a Purebred GSD who is quite the size and she
is named Angel. GSDs are known for their cleanliness, loyalty, curiosity, maternal instincts, and guardianship. )

   Gabrielle looks almost just like me. The main differences are her skin and hair (and ofc her ears. And eyes, 'cause the style) My hair isn't as full not is it as saturated, I have a more dustier, darker blonde (It's actually a very beautiful shade of blonde, Gabrielle just has a different shade.) Her skin is a little more tan, I'm very pale due to my extremely fair skin.